Sunday, February 13, 2011

Group Collaboration- The Importance of Being Earnest

I didn't make any drastic changes to my paragraph since Friday.  The only thing I changed was adding a connection to the thesis in one of my transition points.  I think we will only need to altar a few things in our topic sentences of our individual paragraphs to make the essay flow better.  And for the conclusion I liked the ideas that Catherine had in her blog post yesterday.  Other than that I think we are good to go :) Catherine-Did you change the concrete detail that we both had to start with?
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  1. AdoraNFebruary 13, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    Kayla, I need you to facebook/email your paragrph whatever so I can start writing the transtion between pragraphs thing! Otherwise, I'm good to go! Oh and when you do, facebook/email explain what you mean by the connection to the thesis:)

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  2. Catherine GraceFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    I did change my CD, so no problem there! still need to think about aphorisms though...

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