So many paragraphs, so many skills

Writing a quality paragraph requires certain specific skills. You need an interesting topic sentence that clearly states your topic and grabs the reader's attention. Your topic sentence should introduce the reader to what you will talk about in the rest of the paper. Another extremely important aspect of the paper is your concrete details. Concrete details need to be carefully chosen to be sure that they accurately support your topic. Commentary is also important, as it follows the concrete details and helps you to show your own thoughts and opinions. Many papers contained too much plot summary in their commentary. Other papers contained no plot summary, but had repetitive thinking. Finally, the conclusion is also important because it wraps up your entire paper and leaves the reader with their last thoughts on your paragraph.
I personally needed to focus on my transition statements and my commentary more. My paper could have been smoother if I would have used better transitions. Even though I had enough commentary, I used a little bit of plot summary that should have been left out. I also could have used some better word choices to make my paper more interesting.